Haiku Friday: Weather
[Two to make up for my previous dereliction of my haiku duty.]
Morning sun creates
Hazy backlight for buildings.
Foggy edifice.
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Windows shattering?
Tornado? End of the world?
No - Texas rainstorm.
Hazy backlight for buildings.
Foggy edifice.
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Windows shattering?
Tornado? End of the world?
No - Texas rainstorm.
On 8/17/2008 5:59 AM,
Jen said…
Your window shattered?
Whoa.
Gorgeous haikus, Jami. I sure wish I could write like this.
On 8/18/2008 10:43 PM,
robkroese said…
I wish we had rainstorms here. It hasn't rained at all for 4 months.
On 8/22/2008 5:01 AM,
Jenn in Holland said…
Hahahaha! Love the Texas rainstorm one. Having lived through the wildness of several many of those, I think you sum up the experience perfectly!
Other haiku is also lovely. Very strong image! You are so damn good.
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